First Draft of the Animation and Changes

So I finished the animation and rendered it out in full-res for the group to see. This is it:

Everyone really liked the style, the movement and everything to do with how it felt. They just had a few suggestions concerning some of the finer details.

Jake's comments:

Jess's comments:

So there were two issues. The movement was too quick and the left side didn't have enough movement. I agreed with both of these statements and had a couple of things I wanted to fix myself.

So I slowed the camera move, added interest and movement to the left hand side and also changed how the title it revealed at the end (because I thought the page turn looked a little cheap and amateur after repeated viewings).

I'll post the finished result later because I went straight to adding sound to it and I want that to be another blog post but I am very happy with the outcome.